So I redid Moonstar's story

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So here's a summary of it:

After her sister, Ravenstar, retired from being a leader to be with her kit, Moonheart, as deputy, took her place. While the truth was that Ravenfeather wanted to be with Yinkit, cats began to spread rumors that Moonheart had forced her to retire. At first, Moonstar ignore these rumors, until cats began to believe them. So they started to disrespect her. Moonstar hoped that Ravenfeather would of told her cats the truth, because they wouldn't listen to her. But she said nothing, and let the awful things happen. At one point, Faceclaw attacked Moonstar in front of the whole clan, which threw her off the edge. Her leadership was not only ruining the relationship with her siblings, but with the one she loved, Brownclaw.

So one night, while Ravenfeather had stayed up, she attacked her. She blamed her for her messed up life. Ravenfeather had never seen Moonstar have these angry outbursts before, it was almost like she wasn't her self. Eventually, their brother, Darkwipe, stepped in and fought with Moonstar until she passed out. Ravenfeather decided to become leader again. When she woke up, she found herself in a large cage with two other cats, Daycamper and Shade. Eventually, these cats help her escape. As soon as she got out, she ran the opposite direction of a forest, until she met a blind, brown kit named Buzzardkit (I don't own him, the owner will be link in the description). 

After many any days of being with this kit, he introduced her to his small clan called BlazeClan. Sure, they were only four cats, but it was a decent clan. A couple of season past, and Yinkit is now leader of FireClan. Moonstar felt anger burn inside her one night, and decided to go to FireClan camp. When she arrived, she attacked Ravenfeather. Every cat was stunned by this, and only Yinstar jumped out to save his mother. For this, he died. Moonstar was shocked as soon as her outburst was over. What she didn't know, is that Buzzardpaw had been listening to all of this. For that, she never really returned to FireClan. Until FireClan's medicine cat, Whitemoon, was exiled. The clan had caught her hanging out with Moonheart, who was now a full on BlazeClan warrior, along with Daycamper and Shade, who was now known as Nightfur.

Since BlazeClan lacked a medicine cat, Moonheart welcomed her old friend into BlazeClan. After that, everything seemed great for her. Buzzardwing became her mate, and she had his kits. Until Buzzardwing was given a prophecy that foretold the furture of two of his kits, Stonekit and Spotkit. Some seasons pass by, Buzzardstar being leader and her kits, except for one, becoming warriors. Suddenly, Spotheart began to pick up on her mom's outbursts when Frosttail died. She nearly killed Aspenheart because of this, and Moonheart knew there was nothing she could do.

Then everything went down hill. Slivertip, Spotheart, Whitemoon, Ravenfeather, and Buzzardstar all died in between seasons, leaving her with only two kits left, Stonestar and Plocidalewing. Moonheart then decided to retire into the elder's early, watching Stonestar's kits grow up. 

And for now, she is still alive.


damn this was long
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